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Change; and my love, hate relationship with it!

2/4/2015

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I don’t like change. Never have, never will. 

,Now that that’s been said, I have to admit that I have changed the beginning of my book seven times. Yes, seven! 
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Okay, I’m having trouble getting the hook right. I’m also struggling with balancing backstory and adding just the right hints of my story world to engage readers.

A couple of weeks ago, I paid a professional to critique the first 50 pages of my book. I understand and agree with some of what she said and I will fix them. Some things I don’t agree with, so I’ll ignore those. However, some parts confuse me.

As I said, I’ve changed the first scene of my book several times, each time because of a suggestion by a contest judge, an excellent writer, or the agreed consensus of my writers’ group.

Now, what do I do, make the changes suggested by the professional? But, they’re different from the other suggestions. Do I delete the first three chapters, as suggested and start again?

I’m confused. 


So yesterday, I pulled out my writing books and began rereading them. I'll continue researching before I do anything drastic. 


But where to start?

Have you ever felt overwhelmed by all the different comments?

What did you do? How do you know whose advice you should follow? 

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